Couple things. Clearly you know how to edit, so why the fuck are all your limp dick moments left in? It seriously kills all momentum. No one wants to see your disgusting acme-ridden face, especially when we only see her face and tits in the beginning or when she's trying to jerk you back to life. Great girl, but dude is mostly shit all around.
Why do you use a condom when you get rid of it after the first few minutes? Doesn't make sense to me. Otherwise nice video with a little confusing description (in the first minute some text pops up in the video)